Wednesday, September 9, 2015

Journalism from Hell

Death of English
(Via the dreaded"run on" sentence)
                           Kate Jacobson*
                             Staff writer
              *Why is this person smiling?
   A man was arrested after he fled from police and injured a pregnant woman after he hit her car with his SUV and she chased him down, an arrest report says.
     Lantana police arrested Israel Phillips, 68, on Sunday.
     Police said a 20-year-old woman was at a bank ATM at 1320 W. Lantana Road at about 11;30 p.m. with her door open when Philipps drove up and smashed into it. The door went back into the car and hit the woman, who is five months pregnant in the abdomen.
                                South Florida Sun-Sentinel 9/9/2015     

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